Flying Carpet

                           The magic flying carpet

Later that day my sister came to visit me.We were giggling, watching t.v and playing catch with my dog.My sister notest my carpet, she said lets go some where.As we were in the car listening to the beauty of the music and singing along was great.When we got to this place the first thing I saw was,the carpets store.

I said “I don't need a new carpet”

she said “oh yes you do and i'm taking you inside right now!”

“I answered politely okay then lets just go for a look”

we walked inside this beautiful store

she said “you can get any carpet but just one”

I replied okay

I was looking around the room.At that moment I saw this very beautiful capet hiding behind the other capets when I saw the colours they looked stunning. She brought it for 60 dollars. When we got home I said thanks sis I like it .that afternoon I was cleaning, and putting the old carpet in it bin then placed the new carpet on the ground in my room.by the time I putted the carpet down she said bye Ngatos im going home now.I replyed bye.

I sat on my carpet.laying on it with happiness.Later that night I went to cook some food.

After a while I finished eating. The carpet sparkled like magic.That night I went to bed I had a dream that the carpet could fly in the sky and the bestest part of it was when I was on it, near the moon.

As I woke up.Then I had another dream about winter,summer,autumn and spring.The bestest part about the winter,summer,autumn and spring was winter when there was snow falling down from the sky.I jumped on the carpet but it did not fly I tryed every thing.But it did not work.

I looked behind the carpet it said this little quote that said magic magic carpet fly into the sky

When I said that quote the magic carpet flew, Near the moon.I could feel the cold breeze smashed on my face,the trees swishing back and forth, Great looking houses, schools and much much more.Meanwhile I was quite scared because i'm scared of heights.When I got home I rang my sister as fast as I could and told her to come.When she got to my house I told her that the carpet could fly.She nevers believe me thats the only thing i hate about her.

when we were on the carpet I said the I told you that's magic.

Cyber Smart

Aluminium Cans

Today my group presented in front of the whole class.we had  5 groups  different subjects it was aluminium cans, bottles, plastic bags, compost, paper and food scraps.We learnt new stuff like it will take 80-100 years for a aluminium can to dissolve and in the ocean it will take 80-200 years to decompose.

On sunday

On Sunday morning when I got home my mum told me to get ready to go to my papas house because there having a meting to go to the cook islands at the end of the year.Well anyway when I was getting ready to go to my papas house and then my phone got flat so I charged it for like twenty minutes.When I went to my room to get my cloths I threw my lollie pop on my bed but I didn't open it

I grabbed my cloths i grabbed my t-shirt,skinny jeans and a jumper.When I was really I grabbed my lollie pop and ate it in the car on the way to my papas.When we got to my papas house I jumped out the car and ran in side to say hi to every one after a  while I went in to my cousins room  she was in the room with my aunty Rosy they were playing on the laptop on Facebook and also taking pictures.I saw some chips on there bed so I asked if i could have some because I didn't have breakfast so she said yes.

Latter that day My I was plating my aunty's hair when I was doing the first two my hands were kind of getting tried and saw.When I got half way to her hair I went to have a little bit of  some chicken,rice and soup it was yum .After that I went to the shop with my mum,dad,two sisters my little brother and my two aunty's  when we went to the shop my dad brought two drinks some lollies for me,Bella,Jadaliegh and David.My aunty brought her some cookies for her so my mum brought us a cookie each.

Synonyms

Writing

I panicked as I looked ...

As the strong coldness of the wind opened on me, I could feel a cold breeze. I felt frozen even though I had a hot water bottle. All I could see was a big black cloud. It made me so angry because I had my rugby game. I could see that it was getting  darker and greyer every time. I blinked. impossible I mumbled. After a while it started to get sunny and the clouds were going away slowly I smiled. My mum said that my Grandparents are coming over soon.

Later that day my Grand parents came over from the North Shore just to visit me and because they haven't seen me since I was about two years old. I heard that I use to get a lot of support from them. They were talking about me going to the Cook Islands with them next week. Well I was so happy.

One week later we were just about to leave to go to the Cook Islands. I started to panic when the plane was flying.The wind was so strong.I sat next to my papa and grandma. They brought some sweets for us to eat on the way there.It took four hours to get there. I fell asleep in the plane because I was tired

Writing

It was the strangest thing I have ever seen...

As the sun was rising high in the sky, the waves were crashing, one wave landed on another wave. Along came this big beauty wave it was super high, then suddenly a girl with  long blonde curly hair with blue shiny eyes and she also had a nice tan.She was walking with a sausage dog it was

very long It was the strangest thing I ever seen it was about as long as my arm. I was very shocked because the dog was wearing clothes and shoes just like what humans wear.I heard the lady calling her dog,”Jake.I  turned and felt sorry for it because the dog had two faces, he had blue cute eyes and was also brown and long.

They sat next to me on their fancy coloured seats.I was very quiet and still I had nothing to say. The dog jumped on top of me and licked my face, he left a little bit of slobber but I know his mouth was clean. I smiled and patted the cute puppy but I was still quite scared of him."The waves are  beautiful”, the lady said. ‘Of course”, I mumble, laughing with a cheeky smile.The beach was very packed because it was high tide and also it was very sunny there was no clouds.

Blooms Taxonomy reading activities

Grand Canyon

             Grand Canyon

As I prayed to God with all my heart and strength I thought that I would take this chance to walk across the Grand Canyon. For my family and for the people that had passed away I feel very strong and quite scared.It was about 15,100 feet high and 457 meters wide, It is taller than the sky tower. Do you know that I am the first person that has no safety net or tether on and all I had a balancing stick to help me balance , the metal cable that was about 2 inches thick.The shoes that I am wearing it felt like barbie shoes, I was also wearing skinny jeans.

I struggle to walk across the Grand Canyon because the wind is pretty rough so I had so bend down for my balance to come back or else I would fall like a squashed apple.I could tell that my family would not look because they were afraid that I wouldn't make it across.There were cameras coming near me making me nervous, I tried to focus on walking.I stopped twice because first, the wind, and second because the cable picked up.I was praying almost throw the hole walk.

When I was almost finished I could see my beautiful family staring and clapping. My heart was beating so fast,I ran the last few steps. When I jumped off the metal cable there were lots of flashers from the cameras going into my eyes., My family were happier than ever.They hugged me with all their love .It took me 22 minutes and 54 seconds to walk across it.

THAT WAS THE LONGEST 22 MINUTES OF MY LIFE!!!

Grammarnastics

 WALT Use place values to add numbers to a target numberWALT use place punctuation correctly in a sentence. WALT structure dialogue correctly by using speech marks and other punctuation that is appropriate for the purpose of the dialogue.

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Punctuate the following story correctly.

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“What’s that?” Gasped Raj.

“What?” Asked Sara following his finger pointing.

“I can’t see anything!” Her eyes were not yet used to the darkness.  

“That look! There’s something moving by the greenhouse.” Hissed Raj. Something glided silently past the panes of glass which shone in the moonlight.  

“Yes! I can see it now.” Whispered Sara.”  

“It’s fox Raj.” Whispered Sarah.

“ No I don’t think so! It’s too tall. It’s more like a small person, perhaps a child.”  Raj looked towards the greenhouse.   He breathed.

 “There it is again! Did you see it Sara?” Sara could not believe her eyes.

“I saw it and I could see through it she said.”  Raj nodded his head

“A ghost!” They both whispered.

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