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Monday 16 December 2013

Letter To Mrs Hansell

                      
“SMILE let everyone know that today, you're a lot stronger than you were yesterday ”


Dear Mrs Hansell,
You are a positive , intelligent principle. We would like to say a big THANK YOU. You are very strong and you make Tamaki Primary proud. I hope you have safe trips around the world. You're very beautiful , confident and also helpful. You're a very good leader to our school . I like the way you have taught us maori songs with great moves. You are really amazing , you mean a lot to Tamaki Primary. You're a very good role model.
You have showed us a lot of pride, have made sure we represent our school as good people not bad people.


Love from Ngatokurua David-Simon



“If you have only one smile in you give it to the people you love”



My Netbook Reflection For 2013

Tuesday 3 December 2013

The Bush



Feeling excited and prepared to go for a long walk into the bushes made my day. So first we made our lunch and our drinks, Then the teaches got all the kids together and done a head count just in case someone was missing. Once everyone was there we got into two lines. Everyone was feeling confident and brave because for some of us it was our first time going for a bush walk.


As we got into the bushes the leaves were slowly falling off the trees , hearing crunching noises from all the footsteps of dried leaves sounded awesome .We were all walking into two straight lines through the bush there was a teacher in front of the line, in the middle and at the back. We were showing people how we respect the environment around us. As people were coming towards us we made way even those the bush was quite small.


We were following the principle no one had no idea we were going so she walked the wrong way, but eventually someone told her.She said don’t be silly we looked at the closes sign and it said we were going to the creek.Every one was like the creek.
No way! we replied

So we turned around and we made sure we followed the sign all the way to the waterfall. It took us about twenty minutes to get there , once we finally got there we sat anywhere we liked so I sat in front of the waterfall. I was skimming rocks across the water. It was so beautiful and everyone enjoyed their day.

Monday 2 December 2013

Lean On Me

Lean On Me

WALT use our analysing skills.

Success Criteria:
I can...



Part of the song
What is the main idea(s) in this part of the song?
Give an example from the text that supports this idea.
Give another example from the text that supports this idea.
Express your viewpoint by synthesising what you have analysed.
-Do you agree with this part of the song? Why/why not?
Verse 1
The main idea in verse 1 is that we all have pain and sorrow
“If we were wise”
“Theres always tomorrow”
Yes. We agree with this part of the song because some people focus on vanity and on each others physical appearance instead of reality.
Chorus
One of the main message I found in this lyric is when you’re down theres is always someone there to help you
“Lean on me when your not strong ill be your friend”
“It won’t be long till ill need someone to lean on”
I agree with what this verse is trying to tell me because no matter what your going through you’ll always have that someone to help pull you through
Verse 2
One of the main points is helping and being thoughtful
“So just call on me brother hey, when you need a hand”
“we all need somebody to lean on, lean on me”
I agree with the main points in this verse because no matter how hard something is you can always take risks with those who are willing to make them with you.
Verse 3
Main point is being courage and having faith
“Call me when you need a friend”
“Call me, call me”
I agree because some ones always there when you need them you just don’t have to be shy to ask
Verse 4


The main point in be verse 4 is don’t be shy
“Lean on me”
“We all need somebody to lean on”
I agree with this because everyday you will get through this, tomorrows new day and there is still people being ashamed of themselves for who they've become

My Highlight Of The Year

My highlight of the year for 2013 is learning new things
at Technology like  Art.
We did mosaic for decorations to make
our school beautiful .
This is my second time doing mosaic
the first time I did it , 
we did letters we were spelling Tamaki Primary
I had the letter
“R”
Now this time were doing numbers 
For the class rooms
my number i
“2”


My Speeach

           Kirk Franklin

“Smile it’s the key that fits the lock on every ones heart”
I'm grateful for this opportunity to say my speech
to you all.Today I will be talking about peace and
happiness.Happiness is when someone smiles its
like freedom.Peace isn't about fighting its a state
or period in which there is no war or a war is ended.
Smile when you're down. This song I choose includes
peace and happiness.What I will be talking about is
“Smile” By Kirk Franklin

This song reminds me of my friends and family,
It opens the lock for freedom and it even reminds
me to smile through tough times or when I’m sad.
Having a problem though life is tough but I have
families and friends that can help me.

This is one of my favourite songs It always reminds
me to smile every day most times I smile with
happiness because I see my family and friends when
I barely see them. This is an entertaining song it gets
the audience attention and maybe they replay it a lot
of times.

“Peace” Peace reminds people to smile when they're
down. Don’t make war with each other make friendship
and aroha with friends and family. When the power of
love overcomes the love of power the world will finally
know peace. Peace is like friendship ,  friendship is
like peace. It’s like they have the same meaning.

Harmony is the same as peace , everyone in the world wants
peace. I know everyone has war everyday,even myself have
wars with others. but why does everyone have to hate? Is it
hard to love? people should not make war anymore, and no

more hatred? Let’s make the world a peaceful place.

Friday 22 November 2013

High Tide




High Tide

Skimming the rocks along the water
standing beside you ,
seeing the sand oozing between our toes
giggling and laughing as we stand still to strike a pose,



When the tide is in ,
It rushes against the rocks with anger
higher and higher it travels ,
wiping the sand out
now  it’s under the water,
low low low.

The water has vanished,
 our footprints lying on the wet sand
leaving the ocean,

lonely and sad.