WOW Ngatokurua! The 'vocabulary' you used to describe Fractions. I liked the way you used the words Numerator and Denominator! Next time I think you should work on explaining more about what these words actually mean! Another thing you should work on is explaining your description in more depth. Because if someone was to read that description, they would think "Huh? What is this about?" Okay. Anyway. Keep up the amazing work, and remember, when I read your next piece of work, all of the things I have given you as FF SHOULD be added in it!!!
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WOW Ngatokurua! The 'vocabulary' you used to describe Fractions. I liked the way you used the words Numerator and Denominator! Next time I think you should work on explaining more about what these words actually mean! Another thing you should work on is explaining your description in more depth. Because if someone was to read that description, they would think "Huh? What is this about?" Okay. Anyway. Keep up the amazing work, and remember, when I read your next piece of work, all of the things I have given you as FF SHOULD be added in it!!!
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